Pitch Feedback

Feedback on our pitch

Dan did not like the name at first but he warmed up to it when he understood our title sequence.
He also likes the idea and the British take on what is typically an American genre.

Dan thought the storyboard was good but we could "rework the ending of it" and include more concepts and also add more close up shots.
Dan believes it is going to sink or swim on the mise en scene side of things and costume as we have to over exaggerate and "really go to town" and wear the most ridiculous outfit we could come up with. We should go over the top with our costumes to fit our characters.


Detail on pitch

Specific details of the costume that we will be wearing like the mise en scene is reallt good.
More detail with the institution we will be using (universal) in which we forgot to mention in our pitch.
Dan also thought we could include a new character.
We were told we have a good filming schedule by our classmates which is working on Sunday 25th of January and Friday the 30th of January.
We should try keep them to two busy days so the shots can match.
Amy said more detail with the production schedule and another student said they liked our detail about our filming location.



"Good over all"