Dan's feedback

• Suggest different establishing shot
• Shot of Ashley coming out of the coffee shop is very good
• Could have used the knife for comedy a little more 
• Would be nice if we have a close up of the knife 
• Make sure its a match cut and not a jump cut 
• Dan likes the shot of Shannon on the skateboard 
• cut shots of Seun crossing the road 
• If you show 1 person walking to the college show all character should be shown walking to the college 
• Try balance the amount of screen time we all get